You've revised your first chapter so many times you could recite it, and it still isn't pulling a reader in. After years of reading first chapters, here's what I've learned: when one works, it's rarely because of the prose. It's because of what's happening underneath it. Today, I walk you through the three things a reader needs from your first chapter, and how to tell whether yours delivers.

IN THIS EPISODE

• Why your first chapter doesn't have to be perfect before you write the rest of your story
• The difference between exposition that stalls a chapter and exposition that reveals character
• The question to ask before any piece of backstory goes into your opening
• Why the strongest first chapters are built around one event, and how to find yours
• The difference between your character's big story goal and what they want right now
• Three questions to ask when your first chapter still isn't working after another round of revision

RESOURCE MENTIONED IN THIS EPISODE

Someday This Pain Will Be Useful to You by Peter Cameron

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