Should you include a prologue or skip it? Here's how to make the right choice for your novel.

Prologues are one of the most debated topics in fiction. Some literary agents warn against them, some readers skip them altogether, and yet many of the most beloved bestselling novels begin with one. The real question is this: Does your story need a prologue, or will Chapter One carry the weight on its own?

In this episode, I'm breaking down when a prologue truly adds value, when it works against you, and how to write a prologue that pulls readers in instead of pushing them away. If you've been second-guessing whether your book needs a prologue, this conversation will provide a clear way forward and the confidence to know you're making the right decision for your story.

Here’s what you’ll hear inside the episode:

[02:05] Why most prologues fall flat and the single question that tells you if yours is worth keeping.

[03:30] The five types of prologues that actually work (with bestselling examples you’ve probably read and loved) and how to know which one, if any, your book actually needs.

[08:40] Why Brandon Sanderson’s prologue in The Way of Kings is a masterclass in hooking readers and setting the stage for an epic story

[11:45] The three key ingredients every strong prologue requires if you want readers to become immersed from the first page and keep turning the pages.

[14:50] Actionable tips to help you create intrigue, build tension, and leave readers desperate to turn the page into Chapter One.

By the end of this episode, you won't be stuck second-guessing your beginning anymore. You'll know whether your novel needs a prologue or if Chapter One is the stronger start (and you’ll understand why). That way, instead of circling back to rework your first pages again and again, you can move forward with confidence, knowing your story is starting exactly where it’s meant to.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Take the Author Success Blueprint Quiz to get personalized next steps for your writing, editing, and publishing journey
• Grab my free Novel Writing Roadmap, a simple, step-by-step plan to help you trust your story, remove the guesswork, and actually finish your first draft.

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Learn how to write authentic, diverse characters without over-explaining or fearing criticism.

Writing diverse characters can feel intimidating. You want to include different voices in your story, but worry about misrepresenting them. This leads many writers to either avoid diversity altogether or fall into the trap of over-explaining everything for a mainstream gaze, thereby diluting the power of their story.

In this episode, I sit down with Tiffany Grimes, founder of Burgeon Design and Editorial and an MFA-trained editor who specializes in amplifying marginalized voices. After recognizing areas for growth in her own feedback, Tiffany has spent years helping writers shed performative expectations and write with radical honesty.

Here's what we cover:

[05:50] Tiffany's vulnerable experience writing about a Vietnamese character and learning she wasn't the right person to tell that story.

[09:00] The core framework that separates writing "about" a community versus writing "to" your community from the inside.

[19:00] Why you should give yourself permission to write the stereotype first in early drafts.

[20:25] How Jesinia (a deaf character in the Fourth Wing) shows why trusting your audience creates better representation.

[21:00] The protection question that helps you identify when you're diluting your story for mainstream audiences.

[26:45] Understanding emotional clarity and how readers' experience goes deeper than just character representation.

Whether you're writing characters from your own experience or exploring different perspectives, this conversation offers compassionate guidance for creating authentic, powerful stories that honor both your characters and your readers.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Tiffany Grimes Website
• Free Workbook: Breaking Mindset Barriers and Setting Intentional Goals
• Writing an Identity Not Your Own: A Guide for Creative Writers by Alex Temblador

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Five book coaches reveal the editing secrets that turn messy first drafts into ready-to-publish manuscripts.

Finishing a first draft is an incredible milestone, but what comes next can feel overwhelming. If you're staring at your messy pages and wondering how to even begin editing, you're not alone. The good news is that there is a way to move forward without spiraling into revision confusion or self-doubt.

In this episode, I've invited five fiction writing coaches to share their best tips for tackling your messy first draft. These strategies will help you gain clarity, cut through the overwhelm, and make real progress toward a publishing-ready manuscript.

Here's what you'll learn:

[02:05] A clever mindset trick that exposes what's really on your pages and why changing your font is editing gold.

[07:30] Why putting your finished first draft away for a little while is the secret to finding your story's true purpose.

[16:45] How two simple "If Only" statements reveal exactly what's missing from your protagonist's journey and plot structure.

[12:35] The "one element at a time" editing method that stops you from drowning in overwhelming revisions and actually makes progress.

[22:30] Why your climactic scene holds all the revision answers and how to mine it for the characters, skills, and growth your story needs.

Tune in to learn how to edit your messy first draft with confidence, simplicity, and ease so you can finally move closer to the finished book you've been dreaming about.

🔗 Links mentioned in this episode:

• Monica Cox’s Website
• Erin Halden’s Website
• Nita Collins’s Website
• Elyse Seal’s Website
• Ayesha Ali’s Website
• Ready to edit your novel? Grab my FREE DIY Editing Roadmap: 10 Steps To Editing Your Novel that’ll help you turn your messy first draft into a publish-ready manuscript without the overwhelm and wasted effort.

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